安徽地區20xx年中考英語復習專題十六書面表達課件(已修改)

　

【正文】 專題十六 書面表達 中考英語 (安徽專用 ) A組 2022— 2022年安徽中考題組 Writing 1(2022安徽 ) 某英文雜志社正面向九年級畢業生征文 ,請從以下要點中選擇一至兩個方面 ,并結合具體 事例 ,用英語寫一篇題為“ Thank you, my teacher!”的短文參加此次活動。要點如下 : 。 。 。 4.…… 注意 : 80~100。 ,以使行文連貫 。 。 五年中考 答案 [寫作要點 ] 。 。 :嚴格要求 。耐心指導 。熱情鼓勵。 [參考范文 ] I39。d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she39。s helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I39。ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English. Thank you, my dear teacher!The love and support from you will be with me forever. 精彩詞句 :fail ,未能通過 。encourage 。promise 。turn to sb. for help向某人 求助 。patient : (1)After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions.(every time 引導時間狀語從句 ) (2)She was always patient to make me understand every single question.(不定式短語作狀語 ) (3)With her help, I39。ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English. (With her help作狀語 ) Writing 2(2022安徽 ) 假如你是李華 ,你們學校將舉行“弘揚中華傳統文化 ——戲曲進校園”展演活動 ,你打算 邀請你的美國朋友 Mike參加。請你根據以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。 :7月 1日下午 2點 。 :學校操場 。 :文化展覽、節目表演等。 提示詞 :戲曲 opera n. 表演 performance n. 注意 : 80~100。 ,以使行文連貫 。 。 ,不計入總詞數。 Dear Mike, I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture. Yours, Li Hua 答案 [寫作要點 ] ,屬于應用文。 ,以一般現在時為輔。 ①邀請的原因 ,即學校將舉行“弘揚中華傳統文化 ——戲曲進校園”展演活動 。 ② 時間是 7月 1日下午 2點 。③ 地點在學校操場 。④ 內容包括文化展覽、節目表演等。可以適當 發揮 ,詞數 80~100。 [參考范文 ] Dear Mike, I know you are interested in traditional Chinese culture. Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about traditional Chinese operas at 2:00 . on July 1. It will be held in the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on. It39。s a chance for you to learn more about traditional Chinese culture. Come and join us! I think we39。ll have a great time. I39。m looking forward to your early reply. ? Yours, Li Hua 思路分析 本篇書面表達要求學生寫一封電子郵件 ,開頭和結尾已給出 ,考生需要根據所給要 點適當補充細節。尤其要注意的是 ,寫作時要緊扣主題、囊括要點、文理通順、語言得體。 本題對內容和范圍有所限定 ,但是題目所提供的內容要點有一定的開放性 ,考生寫作時可根據 自己的生活經歷 ,圍繞主題適當發揮。 解題關鍵 要表述清事件的內容、人物、時間、地點和原因 ,即我們常說的五個“ w”(what, who, when, where, why)。確定主題句 ,巧用連接詞 ,并歸納總結。要有新意和亮點。 誤區警示 寫作要點不能缺失 ,不能用中文思維直接翻譯句子 ,詞數要足 ,書寫要工整無誤。 精彩詞句 :traditional Chinese culture 中華傳統文化 。a piece of good news一條好消息 。hold 辦 。 attend :It will be held in the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will at tend.(一般將來時的被動語態 ) Writing 3(2022安徽 ) 假定你是李華 ,你的美國朋友 Jack來信 ,說他暑假期間要來中國交流學習。他學了兩年中 文 ,但是仍然擔心用中文交流時會遇到困難。請你用英語給 Jack寫封回信 ,提幾點建議 ,要點如 下 : 。 。 。 注意 : 80~100。 ,以使行文連貫 。 。 ,不計入總詞數。 參考詞匯 :自信的 confident 肢體語言 body language Dear Jack, How is everything going?I am very glad to learn that you are ing to China this summer. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 答案 [寫作要點 ] 。主體時態是一般現在時。 :① 對朋友的到來表示歡迎和樂意提供幫助 。② 具體建議 :大膽自信、放慢語速、借 助圖畫或肢體語言等表達方式 。③ 美好祝愿。 [參考范文 ] Dear Jack, How is everything going?I am very glad to learn that you are ing to China this summer. It39。s not necessary to worry about your Chinese. I39。d like to share my ideas, which I think might help. First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you municate with others. It39。s of great impor tance to be confident about myself. We Chinese are very friendly so you needn39。t be afraid of mak ing any mistakes. Second, it39。s better to speak slowly and clearly. In this way you can make your self understood more easily. What39。s more, sometimes you can use drawings or pictures, and as you know, body language is also widely used across cultures and very often it really