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【正文】 . information easier to obtainC. easier inventory procedures in businessesD. helpful in education9. Ⅰ. ways to prepare riceA. rice with vegetablesB. fried riceC. curried riceD. rice salad10. I. steps to organize a camping tripA. make a list of necessary items to takeB. get maps of areaC. have car in good conditionD. check weather reportExercise W7These are only a few examples. Your paragraphs will be different. Have a fluent English speaker check your paragraphs.1. The disadvantages of owning a car are many. First, they are much more expensive to buy than bikes or motorcycles. After having purchased a car, the owner is then faced with the expense of maintaining it. Also, it is frequently hard to find a parking place for a car. Last but not least, the increasing number of cars will lead to more serious air pollution and traffic jams, especially in large cities. 2. The reasons a person lives in a remote area may be one of the following. Cities are usually very noisy, and a person may want to get away from the noise. Another attraction of a remote area might be that it is unpolluted. If a person was born and raised in a remote area, he or she may want to remain in the place that is best known. Finally, some people like to be closer to nature, and this is easier away from a city.3. Before applying to a foreign university, one should consider these disadvantages of studying abroad. First, a student may feel alone by being far from family and friends. Also, difficulty in understanding a foreign language can be very frustrating and can affect the student39。 what…./…vary. What…10. …TV。 moreover, they…EXERCISE 3 1. … death。 it…of “defensive medicine”.18. His…with them－he had…once made…help.EXERCISE 2 1….work, for… 2….down。 x 7. the。 the 2. The。the (pupils) 4. The (dinner)。 x 7. The(prison)。 the 2. The (steamengine)。 (so handsome) a (man) 3. (However great) a (disaster) 4. (Many) a (shipwrecked sailor) 5. (Such) an (urgent need) 6. (So urgent) a (need) 7. (as lovely)a (picture) 8. (what) a (serious crisis) 9. (many) a (greater man) 10. (How serious) a (crime)EXERCISE 4 1. the。 a 7. a。 a。 x 3. a。 a。 a。 an EXERCISE 3A. 1. a (very bad night)。 x 2. x。 the 3. The (bat)。a 8. The (youngest)。 the (speeches) 5. the (setting of goals) 6. the (hospital)。 the 3. The。 the 8. x。 as a result, we…3….note。 …2. …sunlight. We…/…sunlight。 Marie…/…TV, and Marie…EXERCISE 41. “On Friday,” the teacher announced, “we’ll take up a new lesson.”2. “ What,” he asked, “do we have to prepare for the camping trip?”3. C4. He greets everyone with “Hi!”5. “You may think I have a lot of garbage in these bags,” one shoppingbag lady volunteered in a church soup kitchen, “but it’s everything I need.”6. C7. “It pains me,” I said, “to find that you both have been panhandling so long that it no longer embarrasses you.”8. Retirement often brings many problems surrounding the “What do I do with myself?” question, even though there may be no financial worries.EXERCISE 51. At one o’clock on September 2, 1666, the Great Fire of London started inside a baker’s shop in Pudding Lane. It lasted five days, and nearly 80% of all the buildings within the London Wall were razed. According to the official report, 13,200 houses, 87 parish churches, over 400 streets, and the enormous old St. Paul’s Cathedral－one of the wonders of the medieval world－were in ruins. Out of London’s 450 acres, only 75 remained untouched. Robert Hubert, a French watchmaker from Rouen, was accused of the fire. The sentence said he “had deliberately started the fire”. After he was hanged, it was conclusively proved that he had not even arrived in London until two days after the fire broke out.2. Mr. Jones was very fond of climbing mountains, so one year he went to Switzerland for his holidays. After he had climbed some easy mountains, he decided one day to climb a more difficult one。t want it known that he was too ill to go on working.5) I regard it important that every one of you should finish your homework on time.6) He took it for granted that his father would e to his help if he got into trouble.7) We thought it highly probable that he might change his mind at the last minute.8) I think it likely that the train will be delayed by the dense fog.9) The doctor thinks it advisable that you should stop smoking.5. 1) Could you show me what you have written?2) This is what we should always keep in mind.3) What they saw in China made a deep impression on them.4) We must not put off till tomorrow what we can do today.6. 1) Nothing can hide the fact that he is growing old. 2) The fact that he works hard does not necessarily mean that he is a petent leader.3) I have a placent feeling that I’m highly intelligent. 4) The explanation that he didn’t see the notice is unsatisfactory./ The explanation is unsatisfactory that he didn’t see the notice.5) Most of us don’t agree with his view that there is no advantage in introducing the new method.6) The news soon spread throughout the country that he won the first gold medal at the 23rd Olympic Games.7) His suggestion that intelligence is a relative matter is not universally accepted./His suggestion is not universally accepted that intelligence is a relative matter.8) He seconded my motion that the vote be postponed.9) The fear that he might not be able to finish the work disturbed him greatly./ The fear disturbed him greatly that he might not be able to finish the work.10) We expressed a hope that Mr. and Mrs. Morrison would e and visit China again. 11) I’ve e from Mr. Lin with a message that he won’t be able to see you this afternoon. 12) There can be no doubt that Suzy is the right person for the job.定語從句1) I went to visit the American author who wrote a number of books about China.2) I ate the soup my