英文作文寫作常見錯誤分析(留存版)

　　

【正文】 ter is to express some opinions on the service in the dining hall. / The purpose of this letter is to make some plaints about the service in the dining hall.三、表達習慣錯誤1) What generated so large a change? / Why is there so large a change?2) Now 6000 yuan is enough for you to buy a P4 puter. / Now you can buy a P4 puter for 6000 yuan.3) In a room often live 68 students. 4) I think there are three reasons for this great change. 5) The prices of the food are too high. / The food is too expensive.6) The reason for this is that some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard. / This is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.四、標點符號及大小寫錯誤1) However, every coin has two sides. I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.2) The man was racing down the street because he was late for the class.3) At last I want to let you know that I love our university very much.4) My favorite sports are swimming, jogging, mountaineering and playing table tennis.5) The best English film in my eyes is Forrest Gump.五、冠詞用法講練EXERCISE 1A. 1. a 2. an3. an 4. an 5. an 6. an 7. a 8. anB. 1. a new office building 2. travel agent 3. an American scientist 4. a day’s outing 5. an Indian stamp 6. a heart attack 7. an advanced country 8. an interesting playEXERCISE 2 1. A (telephone)。 an。 the 8. the。 a (noble animal)。 x 6. the。 the students… choice, therefore10…coffee。s grades. It can be very expensive to pay the costs of travel and housing in a different country. Finally, if here is an emergency at home, it is hard to get home in a hurry.4. Although a person thinks it is safe at home, many different kinds of accidents occur there. Falls are perhaps the most mon accident among both young children and older adults. Poisoning is a danger, especially if an adult leaves medicines or cleaning chemicals within the reach of a small child. Burns frequently occur in the kitchen area during meal preparation. Finally, people cut themselves when using kitchen knives, trimming equipment in the yard, and power tools in the workshop or garage.5. There are several kinds of airports. From an international airport, flights go to other countries as well as to cities in the same country. A national airport usually only serves the cities within its nation. Rural airports usually link a town with a nearby national airport. Private airports are those on a military base or a hospital. Individuals and panies can own their own private airports.（二）段落的銜接1. 1) First, Second, Instead, Third, In contrast, Fourth, Consequently, Finally, But2) Although, First of all, Furthermore, Once, Second, Sometimes, At other times, Finally, Then2. for, so, but, and, and, and, however, but, and3. Television was invented by John Logie Baird. When he was young he built an aeroplane. He tried to fly in it, but it crashed down below. However, Baird was fortunate not to be killed. It did not discourage him. Instead, when he was older he tried to make diamonds from coal. The only result was an enormous explosion. Yet he was not injured. Then, he became a businessman. When his business failed, he thought of working at television. His family advised him not to, but he did not listen to them. He rented an attic, bought the apparatus he needed and started working. Although he worked for a long time, he was not successful. One day he saw a picture on his screen. So he rushed out to get someone he could “televise”. He found an office boy and took him back to his room. However, no image of the boy appeared on his screen. The boy, terrified, had put his head down. When he put it up again, his picture appeared on the screen. That’s how television had been discovered.4. In the United Stated there is a belief that people are rewarded for working, producing, and achieving. Many people believe that there is equality of opportunity that allows anyone to bee successful. This belief is illustrated by stories written by a nineteenthcentury American novelist, Horatio Alger, who wrote about the “American Dream”. In his stories he described poor people who became rich because of their hard work, honesty, and luck. The stories reinforced the idea that all individuals, no matter how poor, were capable of being wealthy as long as they were honest and hardworking. For many Americans, however, Horatio Alger’s “ragstoric。 nevertheless, we…12…weightlessness。 the。 the (behaviour)。 a。 a。 x。 a 。 The(forests) 3. x。 x。 the 4. The (wool)。 it…4….watch, yet…5…..tired, so…6. …booming。 but he did not want to go up it alone, so he found a good Swiss guide, who had often climbed that mountain.At first it was not a difficult climb, but then they came to a place which was not so easy. The guide stopped, turned round and warned Mr Jones. “Be careful here,”he said “This is a dangerous place. You can easily fall, and if you do, you will fall straight down a very long way.” “But,”he continued calmly, “if you do fall here, don’t forget to look to the right while you are going down. There is a quite extraordinarily beautiful view there－much more beautiful than the one you can see from here.”3. It is the simple things that really matter. If a man delights in his wife and children, has success in work, and finds pleasure in the alternation of day and night, spring and autumn, he will be happy whatever his philosophy may be. If, on the other hand, he finds his wife hateful, his children’s noise unendurable, and the office a nightmare, if in the daytime he longs for night, and at night he sighs for the light of day－then what he needs is not a new philosophy but a new pattern of life－a different diet, or more exercise. Man is an animal, and his happiness depends on his physiology more than he likes to think. Unhappy business men, I am convinced, would increase their happiness more by wal