20xx考研英語(yǔ)作文萬(wàn)能模式(編輯修改稿)

　

【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 family and buy houses which are too expensive to afford. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 中間段落從兩方面論證問(wèn)題的危害， 并舉例論證，預(yù)測(cè) 危害的趨勢(shì) To account for the abovementioned phenomenon, several reasons have been put forward. To begin with, the first stessmaker is petition. Nowadays may people, who have a strong careermind are involved in a fierce petion for money, ranks,and fame. In the rat race, they try every means to stay on the top and keep on working until they can hardly addition, the reason why they are suffering a great pain is that they have such a great ambition to succeed and want to acplish their goals in the shortest possible time. Just because of their ambitionw, they put great great pressures on themselves and have no time for relaxation to enjoy better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, % of young people who have once tasted the stress are being physically or mentally ill. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may e out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our heritage left by our ancesters. 最后一段要強(qiáng)調(diào)解決問(wèn)題，談的兩點(diǎn)建議通常是提高人們的意識(shí)，加強(qiáng)執(zhí)法； From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the stress damaging the the health of most people. On the one hand, we should be sensible to develop a positive attitude towards petition. That is, petition is not the ultimate goal of life, but a driving force that motivates us to fulfill our dreams On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of developing a schedule which includes enough time for rest and other important values. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later. 人類社會(huì)的永恒話題 , 對(duì)比論述突出好處 ,比如堅(jiān)持不懈 , 打敗自我 ,團(tuán)隊(duì)精神 ,為人真誠(chéng) ,實(shí)事求是從正面列舉該積極事物的好處 ,克服困難 , 征服挑戰(zhàn) , 完善自我 ,走向成功 ,創(chuàng)造輝煌從反面列舉沒(méi)有 這個(gè)積極事物時(shí)的不好 , 郁悶迷茫 , 無(wú)成就感和前進(jìn)動(dòng)力 , 失敗挫折感最后要談兩點(diǎn)建議措施和聯(lián)想美好未來(lái) . 話題：堅(jiān)持不懈 在失敗的時(shí)候堅(jiān)持 , 做好每一件小事為成功做好準(zhǔn)備 . 首段：四句話，描述圖畫，表明圖畫發(fā)人深思。 As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫 . The most striking feature is 圖畫重點(diǎn)信息 . 描述圖畫兩句，第一句宏觀表明圖畫的視覺(jué)效果。 第二句表明的圖畫的最大特色是什么。 There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 此句子表明圖畫所微妙傳達(dá)的象征含義，發(fā)人深思，十四個(gè)單詞增加亮點(diǎn)，彌補(bǔ)首段字?jǐn)?shù)不足，為下文點(diǎn)名觀點(diǎn)作好鋪墊 Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon that which plays an active part in our society. 二段：七句話，揭示象征含義，從正反兩方面論述該積極事物的重要性。從正面列舉該積極事物的好處 ,克服困難 , 征服挑戰(zhàn) , 完善自我 ,走向成功 ,創(chuàng)造輝煌從反面列舉沒(méi)有這個(gè)積極事物時(shí)的不好 , 郁悶迷茫 , 無(wú)成就感和前進(jìn)動(dòng)力 , 失敗挫折感，而且要舉例證明使觀點(diǎn)具體化，并以倒裝并列句結(jié)尾，畫龍點(diǎn)睛。 As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 profoundly indicates that perseverance is momentous (重要的 ) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great ，成功是衡量該話題是否積極的唯一標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。該段首句設(shè)置爆發(fā)力句型，增加氣勢(shì)，讓老師給出很高的第一印象分，借此開(kāi)頭很有特色。 Perseverance means that people can persist on when they face the difficulty and prepare every detail for the ing ：毅力 —在困境中堅(jiān)持，做好細(xì)節(jié)，準(zhǔn)備成功； It is perseverance that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable , that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing ，大氣磅礴。此萬(wàn)能句子是任何積極事物都可以幫助我們克服困難 ,征服挑戰(zhàn) ,走向成功 . Unless we stick to our dream,(適當(dāng)把主題詞進(jìn)行同義替換 )we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. 雙重否定句子從反面論證宏觀說(shuō)明危害性，如果缺乏該積極事物就生活郁悶挫折被競(jìng)爭(zhēng)所淘汰。 To account for the above mentioned topic, several reasons can be put forward as mentioned below. To begin with In addition Last but not the least No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (舉例證明把 for example 寫成十四個(gè)很有特色，而且表明下面的例子很重要，又增加一分，老師看了這么多 for example，審美疲勞，老師一看該句，一定激動(dòng)。 Many capable people who have the burning desire to win fail to achieve their goals just because they don’t persist (是堅(jiān)持的同意改寫 )especially when they face the music. Many people who。 just because。想成功但失敗因?yàn)樗麄儾荒軋?jiān)持特別是遇到困難的時(shí)候， Only by being perseverant can they guarantee a success and have a strong will to always challenge 倒裝并列句在段落末尾寫，增加氣勢(shì)，第二段結(jié)尾很重要，不要晚節(jié)不保。倒裝句在 結(jié)尾補(bǔ)充再好不過(guò)。此句很萬(wàn)能，表明只有該積極事物讓我們永遠(yuǎn)成功； 三： 5—6句話，承上啟下總結(jié)上文，兩點(diǎn)建議，展望美好未來(lái) From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to persevere than to despair. From 。。承上啟下 , 引起下文 , 多達(dá)二十五個(gè)單詞的總結(jié)句 表明無(wú)論做大事小事，難事容易事，都需要積極事物支持我們。 It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to cultivate confidence and to pursue the ing goals. 建議措施的總起句子 , 引起下文，被動(dòng)句子很有風(fēng)采 . On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine about the colorful future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to punish ourselves in certain ways if we fail to hold on to our dream. 結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰 ,sensible 表明建議很理性 , 從反方面再談很辨證 . However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 這個(gè)閃光的萬(wàn)能句多達(dá) 25個(gè)單詞，強(qiáng)調(diào)實(shí)踐的重要性 .而且還有諺語(yǔ) ,表明建議用于實(shí)踐。 話題二：打敗自我，不斷改正自身缺陷吸收別人長(zhǎng)處，完善自我，自信面對(duì)人生； 1Defeating ourselves or Defeating others Defeating ourselvesfig