高考英語說明文寫作技巧(編輯修改稿)

　

【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 時，可以這樣寫：Laptop is a portable puter that can be carried easily and used conveniently whenever and wherever you are. 在說明的過程中，要借助舉例法和細節(jié)描述法使被介紹的內(nèi)容清晰豐滿。在結(jié)尾段要突出題目要求，重申說明目的，使文章完整。 在語言使用方面，應(yīng)盡量使語言顯得客觀公正，不要使用太多夸張的修飾詞和表達個人觀點的語句，因為你是在客觀說明而不 是發(fā)表議論。為達到這一效果，推薦考生多用被動句，句子不要太復(fù)雜，最好長短句結(jié)合，另外還要記住盡量使用第三人稱。 好詞好句推薦 1．過渡詞 表順序： first, second, third, in the first place, above all, at first, in the beginning, to begin with, besides, what’s more, in addition, furthermore, moreover, another, also, especially, in particular 表時間： first, then, next, after that, next, finally now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days, form now on, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile, till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during, 表示解釋說明： for example, for instance, in this case, such as…, take… for example ， in fact, actually 2. 常用句式： 1) … is a new kind of … produced by… , which is … 2) Made of … , it is light, small, and easy to carry. 3) …containing much top and new t echnique is famous for its excellent quality and reasonable price. 4) China is a large country with rich history and much population. 5) …, the capital of …, lies in the middle of … 6) It has an area of 160,000 square kilometers with a population of over 90 million. 7) It is rich in natural sources such as coal and gold and has mild weather. 8) … is located at the foot of/ by the side of … , to the east of… and to the north of… 9) … is provided for the convenience of customers/ visitors. 10） Built in the16th century, the castle has witnessed too much ing and going in history. 實戰(zhàn)演練 07 年全國卷 一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進行宣傳，請你用英語為其寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括： 1．地點：距白山入口處 500 米； 2．房間及價格：單人間（共 20 間）， 100 元 /天； 雙人間（共 15 間）， 150 元 /天； 熱水淋浴； 3．餐飲：餐廳（中、西餐），咖啡廳（茶、咖啡）； 4．游泳池 ：全天免費開放； 5．歡迎預(yù)定。 注意： 1．詞數(shù) 100 左右，開頭語已為你寫好； 2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. 【例文 1】 Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. The hotel has an ideal location, only 500 meters to the entrance of the mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. The price is very reasonable: 100 yuan per day for a single room and 150 per day for a double room. It provides different kinds of services including three meals a day in the dining hall with choices between Chinese food and Western food, coffee and tea in the caf233。, and a swimming pool open all day free of charge. Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel. Reservation in advance is advised because it is a good choice for all tourists. 點評 : 該文章為第五檔文（ 23 分）。該生把握主了事物類說明文的主要特征，語言客觀、精練。在說明事物時對其特征進行了歸類整理，文章條理清晰。在寫作過程中注意到了長短句、主被動句交替使用，語言錯落有致，豐富精彩，高級句型和詞匯運用恰當(dāng)，顯示出其較強的語言運用能力。文章 覆蓋了所有主要內(nèi)容，完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。 【例文 2】 Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. Our hotel locates 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. If you pay 100 yuan a day, you can live in a single room. If you pay 150 yuan per day, you can live in a double room, certainly all with hot showers. But there are only 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, so you’d better book in advance. The hotel serves three meals every day in the dinning room and you can choose the food you like. You can also enjoy coffee or te