雅思寫作70課程講義(編輯修改稿)

　

【文章內容簡介】 在不斷的改變。為什么要單單指責計算機的害處呢？重要的不是我們是否通過傳統的方式溝通，而是我們是否真正地進行溝通。事實上，計算機技術為我們交換想法和信息提供了方便?；ハ嗑W使我們時時刻刻都相互聯系在一起。除了電子郵件，我們每天還使用聊天室，論壇，遠程會議等來加強我們間的溝通與交流。科技使我們的溝通變得容易了，為我們開辟了無限的機會。所以，不能狹隘地看待溝通與交流。相關的問題不是技術發展帶來的，而是產生于人們自身。計算機只是工具，它的濫用不能歸咎于由計算機本身。范文講解2As science and technology contribute most to the development of society, science students should get more financial support from government than students in other fields (eg. business, language, etc.). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 第一步：確定觀點：反對該觀點第二步：確定論據：（1）盡管科技取得了很多成就，甚至是很多的奇跡，仍然有很多問題讓科技無能為力Notwithstanding the achievements and miracles made possible by science, numerous issues cannot be solved by science or technology.Notwithstanding = despite 舉例：青少年犯罪juvenile delinquency 種族歧視racial discrimination 道德水平下降moral degradation the decline of moral standards （2）一個學生能得到的經濟援助應該由其學業成績來決定The amount of financial aid should be based on the students’ academic performance第一段：Never in history was science and technology so emphasized as in modern society.開篇使用倒裝句，吸引眼球，達到句式多變的要求However, this lopsided emphasis seems ungrounded.Lopsided 不平衡的Ungrounded groundless This inordinate concern was quite groundless.用簡單的語言，亮出自己的觀點。第二段：It is quite debatable that science and technology contribute more to human progress.可商榷的、有異議的debatable arguablequestionable Consensus has yet to be reached concerning ….Modern people are more often plagued by problems of the heart, instead of the body.Plague 折磨Trouble, bother, haunt, harassThis problem of air pollution has haunted every one in the city.The material wealth generated by science and technology often pales against the peace of mind brought by art or literature.pale against 顯得蒼白無力特別提醒：文章中一定要使用一定量的介詞短語，以體現詞匯量的豐富性(lexical resource)第三段：Grants or scholarships should not be lavished upon those without real interest in or dedication to a scholarly pursuit, whereas those with real potential should be offered adequate financial support lest they get distracted by working part time to pay for their education.用or引導同義詞或近義詞，來展示詞匯量grants or scholarship interest in or dedication to lest以免foremost 最重要的第四段In a larger sense, all subjects are vital to human progress.Vital 至關重要的Very importantVitally important （范文請出現在電子講義中）Never in history was science and technology so emphasized as in modern society. One is most likely to get a scholarship for graduate study overseas if he or she majors in science or technology. However, this lopsided emphasis seems ungrounded. It is quite debatable that science and technology contribute more to human progress. Notwithstanding the achievements and miracles made possible by science, numerous issues cannot be solved by science or technology. Social issues such as juvenile delinquency, racial discrimination and moral degradation are all beyond the scope of science. Modern people are more often plagued by problems of the heart, instead of the body. The material wealth generated by science and technology often pales against the peace of mind brought by art or literature. Besides, the amount of financial aid should be based on the students’ academic performance. How much financial support a student is to receive should be determined on an individual basis. Grants or scholarships should not be lavished upon those without real interest in or dedication to a scholarly pursuit, whereas those with real potential should be offered adequate financial support lest they get distracted by working part time to pay for their education. No matter what major they are in, the foremost criteria for receiving financial aid should be their academic potential. Thus, it is not justified to favor science majors more than other students. In a larger sense, all subjects are vital to human progress. It will be a hopeless attempt to pare the importance of each subject. Financial support should be granted to those with real potential. 科技為社會進步做出的貢獻最大，所以學科技的學生應該比別的專業（例如商業、語言等）的學生獲得更多的財政支持。你是否同意這樣的觀點？有史以來，科學技術從來沒有像現在這樣受到重視。如果所學的專業與科技有關，一個學生獲得獎學金到國外留學的機會就會大幅增加。但是，這種過分的重視似乎并沒有根據。科技是否對人類的進步做出了更大的貢獻是很值得商榷的。盡管科技取得了很多成就，甚至是很多的奇跡，仍然有很多問題讓科技無能為力。青少年犯罪、種族歧視、道德敗壞等社會問題都是科學不能解決的?，F代人更多的時候是為心理問題所困擾，而不是生理問題?？萍妓鶐淼奈镔|財富在藝術和文學給人們帶來的心靈寧靜面前顯得蒼白無力。此外，一個學生能得到的經濟援助應該由其學業成績來決定，而且應該單獨對待、因人而異。獎學金或者助學金不應該發給那些對學術追求沒有真正興趣、缺乏奉獻精神的人，而應該發放給那些有學術潛能的學生，以免其為了付學費而打臨時工影響學業。不管是什么專業，考慮對學生發放經濟援助與否的最重要標準應該是他們的學術潛力。所以，不應該偏向于科學專業的學生。從更高的意義上來說，對于人類進步來說，所有的學科都是重要的。我們無法比較究竟哪個學科更重要些。經濟援助應該發放給那些真正有潛力的學生。課后作業：Modern technology gives people more free time, but actually they are busier than before. Do you agree or disagree?Like me, most people are busy all day long. There never seems to be a free moment. It is indeed ironic that the socalled time saving devices actually take up more of our time. We are reluctant to turn everything off and take a moment with ourselves. Mankind is unlikely to lead a more leisurely life in the foreseeable future because science and technology won’t ease our burden too much. Though touted as energysaving, touchbutton devices, most of inventions only open up the possibility of performing certain tasks simultaneously. Before the advent of cell phone, people wouldn’t think of calling others while walking. Thus, they didn’t have to endure the annoyance of answering the phone in the middle of something. It seems that technology makes our lives more efficient but not necessarily more leisurely: far from it actually. The moment we push the ‘print’ key, we don’t lean back and relax but turn our attention to something else. Then, an optimist would laugh at the above assertion. Can’t we just relax and call it a day? We are in control of our own schedule. We don’t need to do extra work if we don’t want do. But it is no so. Contrary to mon belief, a large portion of what we do is not determined by ourselves. At work, we are told what to do。 at home we are influenced by family