如何寫出國動機信(編輯修改稿)

　

【文章內容簡介】 次機會去打造第一印象。”個人陳述/目的陳述是審核官對申請人獲取感性認識的第一途徑，也是申請人從數千萬成績優異，經驗豐富的競爭者中脫穎而出的重要手段。申請人的成長背景，性格特點，愛好專長，求學目標等均將受到申請審核官的特別關注，進而對申請結果產生重大影響。可以說，一篇出眾的個人陳述/目的陳述是錄取成功的必備要素，而個性鮮明則是一篇優秀個人陳述/目的陳述的第一要訣。以下是一份動機信的模板：介紹自己：生活自理能力、學習適應能力，語言能力，并表明自己具有較成熟的心智；職業規劃介紹父母和家庭條件：家庭經濟條件能夠支付留學費用；父母都是大學畢業生，重視子女的教育，支持子女的留學計劃國外優秀的教育資源，可以讓自己學到更多的知識和技能Personal StatementIn 2009, when everyone in China was saving money for real estate investments, I was putting money away so that I could e to the United States and was not a popular decision among my family and would I give up a great job and life to travel half way across the earth and bee a poor college student again? I don’t know how many times I tried to explain to them that I thought it would be a good investment and that in the end it would benefit my life and my career second reason(and maybe the most important)is that I truly enjoy learning and obtaining knowledge。it makes me feel I am growing as a person and gives me a great sense of grandfather was a respected professor at a prestigious university prior to the Cultural Revolution and both my parents are senior engineers who graduated from the best university in we were never rich by any means, my parents always made it a priority to take me to museums, bookstores, and famous colleges in their spare loved reading stories about famous scientists, especially those who persisted in their theories no matter how difficult the atmosphere in my house was one that allowed me to cultivate my mind and find my decision to major in accounting came from my threeyear term as the treasurer of my high school I was responsible for recording, archiving receipts, making the annual budget, and collecting and refunding money for job transformed me into apatient and organized person who wanted to learn more about financial 2001, I enrolled as an accounting student at the(college name).(college name)is one of the most petitive universities in China and my time there taught me a lot about the spirit of hard of my last three years at the university I was awarded a level 3 scholarship as anoutstanding graduation my major GPA was a which ranked me among the top 15 percent of my prove my accounting sense and financial management capability I postponed my graduate education and accepted a position as an auditor at(accounting firm name)Beijing my 4year employment there I had the opportunity to experience the full range of planning, auditing, and my duties there were:(1)the designing of suitable audit methods for clients,(2)using procedures to exam and analyze accounts,(3)evaluating the fairness of financial statements and reports,(4)and providing remendations regarding improving operations and financial positions of largest client when I was with(accounting firm name)was(pany name).I worked as an auditor of their IPO program and on the first annual audit after of the things I ammost proud of is the Revenue and Cost recognition model I created while I was was based on the percentageofpletion method and could check for inconsistencies within the data, calculate the revenue of projects, and exam clients’ bination results when there are model was adopted as the major tool for the entire team of au