第七屆全國英語演講比賽演講(編輯修改稿)

　

【文章內容簡介】 e of the internet，reading books does not seem as important as it once was．do you think people call learn as much on the internet as they can by reading books? which method do you prefer? 他是這樣開頭的：“actually, i don’t agree with the first sentence of this topic：‘in the age of the internet，reading books is not as important as it was once was”’．接下來分析原因，最后做出總結：“so in this age of internet，in this age of modernization，in this age of civilization，why do you have to force someone to choose between internet and books? i prefer using both of them．” 1．2開頭瑞士作家溫克勒說：“開場白有二項任務：一是建立說者與聽者的同感；二是如字義所釋，打開場面，引入正題。”總的來說，開頭應簡短并能抓住聽眾的興趣。開頭一般有以下幾種方法。1．2．1開門見山，直切主題這種開場的方式單刀直入，能夠直奔演講主題，通過簡潔的語言，開門見山，直切主題能迅速吸引聽眾的注意。1．2．2設問式 1．2．3引用式在演講的開始引用名人名言、詩句等，以提出問題或論證自己的觀點。例如第十二屆全國英語演講比賽冠軍的即興演講是這樣開頭的：“when i am dead，my dearest，sing no sad songs for me．plant thou no roses at my head，no shady cypress tree．be the green grass above me with showers and dewdrops wet．and，if thou wilt，remember．and，if thou wilt，forget．’’她引用這首詩來說明“死亡并不恐怖，對于很多人來說死亡是美好的”。1．2．4講述故事法 1．3結尾 俗話說“編筐編簍，重在收口；描龍畫風，難在點睛”。演講的結尾，就是演講的“收口”、“點睛”。好的結尾除了能揭示題旨、加深認識，給聽眾留下完整深刻的印象外還能使整個演講通篇渾然一體；另外好的結尾能夠鼓動激情、促人深思、令人覺醒，能讓聽眾在反復回味中受到教育和啟發。結尾的主要方法有以下幾種方式。1．3．1總結總結法就是以簡潔的語言扼要地概括前面所講述的內容，以便給聽眾留下一個完整、清晰而深刻的印象。這種結尾能夠概括和點化主旨，起到提醒、強調的作用。大多數選手在即興演講時都是以這種方式結尾的。第十二屆全國英語演講比賽第四名黎志敏演講時這樣結尾“in conclusion．1 want to say that we only have one earth and we should spare no effort to make our earth a better place and to steer our earth for the better．” 1．3．2發出號召，促人行動這種方式以強烈的情感，聽眾提出希望，以達到鼓舞斗志，促其行動的目的。第十二屆全國英語演講比賽第九名鄧凱琪在演講“the main benefits and problems of globalization”時這樣結尾“ladies and gentlemen，don’t let globalization affect how you see our culture．but then use this opportunity，use this chance to treasure our culture even more，because it is facing the challenges of globalization．”這種結尾的方式是演講者用深刻的認識和獨到的見解向聽眾提希望、發號召，能使聽眾，精神為之一振，具有動人情、促人行的作用。1．3．3巧引名言，讓人回味通過引用名言、警句、諺語、格言、詩句等作為結尾，不僅使語言表達得精煉、生動、富有節奏和韻律，而且還可以使演講的內容豐富充實，具有啟發性并增加感召力。第十三屆全國英語演講比賽第六名孫怡在演講“share with us your understanding of‘either you’re somebody or you ain’t nobody”’時這樣結尾“1 want to end my speech with one of michael jordan’s famous ’s not how hard you push yourself for your way；its something in you．you think you have to finish it．”用名言式結尾，能給演講者的思想提供有力的證明增加演講的可信度，顯得更加優美、含蓄，睿智大氣，具有較強的說服力和鼓舞作用。1．3．4以問作結，啟發思考以問句結尾有兩種表現形式，一是提出問題引人深思，二是以反問的方式作總結。第九屆全國英語演講比賽冠軍洪嘩在演講“should there be limits on how we display our love in public? what do you think is the best way to express your feelings in public?”時這樣結尾：“and the best scene in my mind to show our love in public，is that we lay on the grass land in my campus，and i read a part of jane eyre to him，and he read a part of oliver twist to me．don’t you think it is a romantic scene for the young lovers to show their love to each other?” 1_3．5臨場應變第七屆全國英語演講比賽“最具潛力選手獎”獲得者張勇被問及“should college students be allowed to get married?”時，這樣答道：“thank you for your question and i think it’s really a good question to show how fast the society is developing．i still remember that last year the contestant number twentyfour，also today’s host，were asked about a question that what qualities you look for in a boyfriend．and only a year later here i’ll be asked