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【正文】 結(jié)尾，全文中出現(xiàn)了五種句式,除了普通的陳述句式之外，還出現(xiàn)了：（1）動(dòng)詞的分詞引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句：Invented some 60 years ago, puters have already transformed the way most of us live.（2）一般疑問(wèn)句Why should puters be singled out as particularly deleterious?（3）定語(yǔ)從句Communication is made easy by technology, which promises infinite possibilities ahead. （4）部分省略句Indeed, many feel isolated and lonely in the midst of crowds or even while talking to others because they are trapped in their own world or because others are in theirs.（完整版范文請(qǐng)收集在電子講義中）Nowadays people can use puters to talk, learn and municate without leaving home. There is a danger that it will cause more isolation and a lack of munication among people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Invented some 60 years ago, puters have already transformed the way most of us live. The advent of the Internet opens up the possibility of municating and interacting via the puter. With more time spent on puters and less with each others, people start to fear the dehumanizing effect of this wonderful human contrivance. This inordinate concern is quite groundless. One doesn’t necessarily bee isolated if he spends most of his time alone using a puter. Isolation only occurs when one is obsessed by his own affair and cares nothing about anything else. Indeed, many feel isolated and lonely in the midst of crowds or even while talking to others because they are trapped in their own world or because others are in theirs. Alienation of people is not caused by how little they talk or meet each other but by the lack of interest in our fellow creatures and the world at large. Hence, puters actually help to prevent isolation by bringing every possible field of interest onto the screen. Everything is at the touch of a fingertip. You can broaden your interests and enrich your life by accessing whatever and whoever you are interested in. As far as munication is concerned, the using of puters is by no means detrimental. In primeval times our ancestors municate by a simple system of shouts and gestures. Then spoken and written languages developed. We now prefer s to ordinary letters. Our mode of munication is forever changing. Why should puters be singled out as particularly deleterious? What matters is not whether or not we municate in the orthodox or traditional ways but the very fact that we do municate. Indeed, puter technology facilitates the exchange of ideas and information. The Internet keeps us linked to each other all the time. Apart from the usual s, chat rooms and forums, teleconferencing is being employed daily to enhance munication. Communication is made easy by technology, which promises infinite possibilities ahead. Thus, munication and isolation must not be defined in a narrow sense. Problems arise not from technological development but from people themselves. Computer is but a tool, the misuse of which it is not responsible for. （中文翻譯可以出現(xiàn)在電子講義中即可，不需要出現(xiàn)在屏幕中）如今，人們使用電腦足不出戶(hù)就可以進(jìn)行交流和學(xué)習(xí)。這有可能會(huì)引起人和人之間的隔閡，使得人與人之間缺乏交流。你是否同意這樣的觀點(diǎn)？從六十年前被發(fā)明到現(xiàn)在，計(jì)算機(jī)已經(jīng)改變了我們的生活方式。互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的出現(xiàn)則使得人們利用計(jì)算機(jī)進(jìn)行溝通交流成為了可能。人們花在電腦上的時(shí)間多了，花在人同他人交往上的時(shí)間少了，于是人們開(kāi)始對(duì)這項(xiàng)人類(lèi)偉大發(fā)明所帶來(lái)的非人性效果感到恐懼。這種過(guò)度的擔(dān)憂(yōu)其實(shí)是杞人憂(yōu)天。即使一個(gè)人花了很多時(shí)間在電腦上，也不一定就會(huì)與世隔絕。真正的隔絕其實(shí)是指一個(gè)人過(guò)分專(zhuān)注于自己的事情，對(duì)其他一切都置之度外。事實(shí)上，很多人即使身處人群當(dāng)中，甚至在和別人談話(huà)過(guò)程中，仍感到孤獨(dú)寂寞，因?yàn)樗约阂呀?jīng)深深陷入了自己的世界當(dāng)中，或者因?yàn)樗車(chē)娜讼萑肓怂麄冏约旱氖澜绠?dāng)中。總的來(lái)說(shuō)，人與人之間的疏遠(yuǎn)不是因?yàn)槿藗兘徽勔?jiàn)面的時(shí)間少了，而是因?yàn)槿藗儗?duì)他人，對(duì)世界失去了興趣。所以，計(jì)算機(jī)其實(shí)有助于防止這種人與人的隔絕，因?yàn)橛?jì)算機(jī)把大家的各種領(lǐng)域的可能的共同興趣都集中到了屏幕上來(lái)了。一切都可以在指尖上實(shí)現(xiàn)。不管你對(duì)什么事情，什么人物感興趣，你都可以通過(guò)計(jì)算機(jī)滿(mǎn)足你的興趣，從而拓寬你的興趣愛(ài)好，豐富你的生活。從溝通的角度來(lái)看，計(jì)算機(jī)的使用也沒(méi)有任何壞處。在原始時(shí)代，我們的祖先通過(guò)喊叫和手勢(shì)來(lái)交流。然后，出現(xiàn)了語(yǔ)言和文字。現(xiàn)在我們更喜歡用電子郵件代替?zhèn)鹘y(tǒng)郵件。我們的溝通方式在不斷的改變。為什么要單單指責(zé)計(jì)算機(jī)的害處呢？重要的不是我們是否通過(guò)傳統(tǒng)的方式溝通，而是我們是否真正地進(jìn)行溝通。事實(shí)上，計(jì)算機(jī)技術(shù)為我們交換想法和信息提供了方便。互相網(wǎng)使我們時(shí)時(shí)刻刻都相互聯(lián)系在一起。除了電子郵件，我們每天還使用聊天室，論壇，遠(yuǎn)程會(huì)議等來(lái)加強(qiáng)我們間的溝通與交流。科技使我們的溝通變得容易了，為我們開(kāi)辟了無(wú)限的機(jī)會(huì)。所以，不能狹隘地看待溝通與交流。相關(guān)的問(wèn)題不是技術(shù)發(fā)展帶來(lái)的，而是產(chǎn)生于人們自身。計(jì)算機(jī)只是工具，它的濫用不能歸咎于由計(jì)算機(jī)本身。范文講解2As science and technology contribute most to the development of society, science students should get more financial support from government than students in other fields (eg. business, language, etc.). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 第一步：確定觀點(diǎn)：反對(duì)該觀點(diǎn)第二步：確定論據(jù)：（1）盡管科技取得了很多成就，甚至是很多的奇跡，仍然有很多問(wèn)題讓科技無(wú)能為力Notwithstanding the achievements and miracles made possible by science, numerous issues cannot be solved by science or technology.Notwithstanding = despite 舉例：青少年犯罪juvenile delinquency 種族歧視r(shí)acial discrimination 道德水平下降moral degradation the decline of moral standards （2）一個(gè)學(xué)生能得到的經(jīng)濟(jì)援助應(yīng)該由其學(xué)業(yè)成績(jī)來(lái)決定The amount of financial aid should be based on the students’ academic performance第一段：Never in history was science and technology so emphasized as in modern society.開(kāi)篇使用倒裝句，吸引眼球，達(dá)到句式多變的要求However, this lopsided emphasis seems ungrounded.Lopsided 不平衡的Ungrounded groundless This inordinate concern was quite groundless.用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)言，亮出自己的觀點(diǎn)。第二段：It is quite debatable that science and technology contribute more to human progress.可商榷的、有異議的debatable arguablequestionable Consensus has yet to be reached concerning ….Modern people are more often plagued by problems of the heart, instead of the body.Plague 折磨Trouble, bother, haunt, harassThis problem of air pollution has haunted every one in the city.The material wealth generated by science and technology often pales against the peace of mind brought by art or literature.pale against 顯得蒼白無(wú)力特別提醒：文章中一定要使用一定量的介詞短語(yǔ)，以體現(xiàn)詞匯量的豐富性(lexical resource)第三段：Grants or scholarships should not be lavished upon those without real interest in or dedication to a scholarly pursuit, whereas those with real potential should be offered adequate financial support lest they get distracted by working part time to pay for their education.用or引導(dǎo)同義詞或近義詞，來(lái)展示詞匯量grants or scholarship interest in or dedication to lest以免foremost 最重要的第四段In a larger sense, all subjects are vital to human progress.Vital 至關(guān)重要的Very importantVitally important （范文請(qǐng)出現(xiàn)在電子講義中）Never in history was science and technology so emphasized as in modern society.