中考英語書面表達訓練題1(編輯修改稿)

　

【文章內容簡介】 的家鄉旅游，并介紹了家鄉的景點和文化。短文有如下幾個特點：首先文章內容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內容，并對細節進行補充和修飾，使內容更加充實、豐富。短文先對Dave發出邀請，然后具體介紹了家鄉的位置、景點、文化等，并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正確的時態和人稱，語法規范，用詞準確，句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣。短文以一般現在時來敘述，注意了謂語動詞第三人稱單數形式的變化。句式結構以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。5．環保話題是人們最關心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結合自己家鄉的變化寫一篇英語短文。注意事項：，條理清楚，作適當發揮。,詞數不少于80。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應對措施立即阻止此類活動,治理環境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環保話題是人們最關心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結合自己家鄉的變化寫一篇英語短文。要求中已經給出了部分提示，動筆先應先認真閱讀提示，確定寫作內容。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。內容上應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。【點睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉做了簡單介紹，內容完整，用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然，順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。6． 書面表達請將短文寫在答題卡相應的位置上。一直以來，同學們對作業持有不同的觀點。在你班的主題班會上，同學們進行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的討論，請你根據提示和要求，并結合自己的實際經驗，發表你的觀點。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned；Practice makes prefect；...Take up too much time；Make us less interested in studying；...Your opinion：要求：1．80詞以上。2．文中不得出現真實的人名、校名。【答案】Dear students，I39。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析：審題之后能明白寫作任務是要寫出一篇小論文，討論每日的作業到底是不是必要的。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點，其次結合自己的實際經驗