最新中考英語書面表達訓練題經典(編輯修改稿)

　

【文章內容簡介】 along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題，寫一篇發言稿。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內容，學生們可以此為提綱進行寫作。審題可知，這篇短文應主要使用一般現在時和一般過去時，注意根據表達需要使用正確時態，并注意謂語動詞的正確形式。內容應主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開心的事情；最后展望自己未來的高中生活。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語，應把他們變成自己的話，并用英語表達出來。寫作時應注意：文章中應包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點；第三部分的內容中還需要自己發揮想象力進行補充，注意應合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。另外注意句式結構要符合英語的表達習慣，用完整的句子表達。句式結構可以簡單句為基礎，穿插并列句、復合句以及其他復雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用適當的連接成分，使文意連貫、自然。【點睛】這是一篇優秀的作文，短文作者根據題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來。短文有以下幾個特點：首先文章內容完整，結構清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情；最后一段對未來進行了展望。各部分內容安排合理，有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態和人稱，語法規范，用詞準確，注意了動詞正確形式的變化。句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣。語言準確、得體，表達自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。5．自信賦予人力量，帶給人快樂。擁有自信，人生處處是舞臺，生活越來越精彩。假如你是李華，請你為?？⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文，談談自信的重要性，分享一次使你更加自信的經歷，并說說我們如何更加自信。提示詞語：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing提示問題：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內容應包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確，簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。點睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。6． 假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 Jack 給你寫郵件表達了想參加你校暑期為外國學生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望，希望你告知活動舉辦的具體時間地點，活動安排以及你的建議。提示詞語： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chin