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【正文】 nd dancing every night．OR：It was a wonderful week．We fished and swam every day and danced every night．2．接排句(Runon Sentence)所謂接排句就是兩個或更多的句子混合交織在一起，而沒有正確的標點符號標明它們之間關(guān)系的句子。這樣的句子，意思含混不清，使讀者不能理解各部分之間的關(guān)系。接排句有兩種形式:一是融合句(fused sentence)，即在句子之間沒有標點符號和句間連接詞；另一種更為常見的形式是逗號連接(ma splice)，即沒有并列連詞，只用逗號代替分號和句號，例句:Fused Sentences 1. The girls scored higher in math the boys scored higher in verbal skills．2. Gestures are a means of munication for everyone they are essential for the hearingimpaired．Comma Splices 1. Education is an elusive word, it often means different things to different people．2. Hikers would especially enjoy a vacation at Yellowstone National Park，the park consists of two million acres of backcountry．改正接排句的基本方法可根據(jù)句子之間的不同關(guān)系分為以下5種。當長句或兩個句子之間的關(guān)系不是很密切或毫無 關(guān)系時，可使用這種方法。例如：Revised Sentences The girls scored higher in math．The boys scored higher in verbal skills．Gestures are a means of munication for everyone．They are essential for the hearingimpaired． Education is an elusive word．It often means different things to different people． Hikers would especially enjoy a vacation at Yellowstone NationalPark．The park consists of two million acres of backcountry2 用分號隔開。用分號連接兩個獨立的分句時，它們之間的關(guān)系 在意義和語法結(jié)構(gòu)上比起使用句號時，關(guān)系較緊密。Revised Sentences The girls scored higher in math；the boys scored higher inverbal skills． Gestures are a means of munication for everyone；theyare essential for the hearing—impaired． Education is an elusive word；it often means different thingsto different people． Hikers would especially enjoy a vacation at Yellowstone National Park；the park consists of two million acres of backcountry．3使用并列連詞連接。當接排的句子之間關(guān)系緊密，容易辨別且 合乎邏輯時，可以借助并列連詞來連接，通常在這些連詞前要 加上逗號。Revised Sentences The girls scored higher in math，and／but the boys scoredhigher in verbal skills． Gestures are a means of munication for everyone， butthey are essential for the hearing—impaired． Education is an elusive word，for it often means differentthings to different people． Yellowstone National Park consists of two million acres ofbackcountry，and hikers would especially enjoy a vacationthere．4使用連接副詞連接。根據(jù)作者的意圖和句子的需要。接排的句 子可以使用連接副詞來連接。這時，句子之間要用分號。在連接副詞的后面還要加逗號，但是一般在單音節(jié)的連詞后不加逗 號。如so，yet。thus等.Revised Sentences The girls scored higher in math；however，the boys scored higherin verbal skills． Gestures are a means of munication for everyone。 neverthe1ess，they are essential for the hearingimpaired． Education is an elusive word。 indeed, it often means differentthings to different people． Yellowstone National Park consists of two million acres of backcountry。 therefore, hikers would especially enjoy a vacation there．、關(guān)系副詞或關(guān)系代詞連接. 當可以判斷出一個句子從邏輯上或意義上從屬于另一個句子時, 可以將此接排句 改寫成復合句。Revised SentencesThe girls scored higher in math，while the boys scored higherin verbal skills．Although gestures are a means of munication for everyone，they are essential for the hearingimpaired．The power failure caused a blackout which created a lot ofproblems．Hikers would especially enjoy a vacation at Yellowstone NationalPark，which consists of two million acres of backcountryDirections: Revise the following runon sentences1． Women no longer need to move into the traditionally male professions they have already opened most of the doors to desirable career paths．2．I called for a reservation at a famous restaurant in town，all the tables were taken before the Dragon Boat Festival．3．Eric was late to work he ran all the way．Revised sentences1．Women no longer need to move into the traditionally male professions，for they have already opened most of the doors to desirable career paths． OR：Women no longer need to move into the traditiona