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【正文】 extent, mankind…earth.7. Like…wild life,…reproduce, grow…fall.8. The…Jim Thorpe, the greatest American…times.9. The…enormous, juicy…appetizing.10. I…kids－educated…the West…movies－would be disappointed.11. I…statue. Its soul, so to speak, is…beauty.12. The…students, teachers, doctors, businessmen, factory workers－people…life.13. Is…underground－in new…caves?14. I…－by correspondence－that I…h(huán)er at Beijing Hotel…Thursday.15. Passengers…beverages: coffee, tea, milk or soda.16. Present…Mr. Ho, Chairman…English Department。 Mr. Brown, a visiting…Denmark。 and…us.17. The…patients。 it…of “defensive medicine”.18. His…with them－h(huán)e had…once made…h(huán)elp.EXERCISE 2 1….work, for… 2….down。 as a result, we…3….note。 it…4….watch, yet…5…..tired, so…6. …booming。 consequently, the pany…7. …in it, and it was…8. … looking。 the food, however, is…9….pulsory。 the students… choice, therefore10…coffee。 others…11…costly。 nevertheless, we…12…weightlessness。 moreover, they…EXERCISE 3 1. … death。 …2. …sunlight. We…/…sunlight。 we…3. …May, yet/but snow…4. …years。 for example, …5. …quiet。 …6. …night。 I…/….night, and/so I…7. …punished。 in fact…/…punished. In fact…8. …food, and so…./food。 therefore, I….9. …very。 what…./…vary. What…10. …TV。 Marie…/…TV, and Marie…EXERCISE 41. “On Friday,” the teacher announced, “we’ll take up a new lesson.”2. “ What,” he asked, “do we have to prepare for the camping trip?”3. C4. He greets everyone with “Hi!”5. “You may think I have a lot of garbage in these bags,” one shoppingbag lady volunteered in a church soup kitchen, “but it’s everything I need.”6. C7. “It pains me,” I said, “to find that you both have been panhandling so long that it no longer embarrasses you.”8. Retirement often brings many problems surrounding the “What do I do with myself?” question, even though there may be no financial worries.EXERCISE 51. At one o’clock on September 2, 1666, the Great Fire of London started inside a baker’s shop in Pudding Lane. It lasted five days, and nearly 80% of all the buildings within the London Wall were razed. According to the official report, 13,200 houses, 87 parish churches, over 400 streets, and the enormous old St. Paul’s Cathedral－one of the wonders of the medieval world－were in ruins. Out of London’s 450 acres, only 75 remained untouched. Robert Hubert, a French watchmaker from Rouen, was accused of the fire. The sentence said he “had deliberately started the fire”. After he was hanged, it was conclusively proved that he had not even arrived in London until two days after the fire broke out.2. Mr. Jones was very fond of climbing mountains, so one year he went to Switzerland for his holidays. After he had climbed some easy mountains, he decided one day to climb a more difficult one。 but he did not want to go up it alone, so he found a good Swiss guide, who had often climbed that mountain.At first it was not a difficult climb, but then they came to a place which was not so easy. The guide stopped, turned round and warned Mr Jones. “Be careful here,”he said “This is a dangerous place. You can easily fall, and if you do, you will fall straight down a very long way.” “But,”he continued calmly, “if you do fall here, don’t forget to look to the right while you are going down. There is a quite extraordinarily beautiful view there－much more beautiful than the one you can see from here.”3. It is the simple things that really matter. If a man delights in his wife and children, has success in work, and finds pleasure in the alternation of day and night, spring and autumn, he will be happy whatever his philosophy may be. If, on the other hand, he finds his wife hateful, his children’s noise unendurable, and the office a nightmare, if in the daytime he longs for night, and at night he sighs for the light of day－then what he needs is not a new philosophy but a new pattern of life－a different diet, or more exercise. Man is an animal, and his happiness depends on his physiology more than he likes to think. Unhappy business men, I am convinced, would increase their happiness more by walking six miles every day than by any conceivable change of philosophy.七、句型寫作練習（一）并列句1) It was a cold snowy day and he had no money left for food. 2) Hurry up or you’ll be late. 3) It rained heavily last night but I went to the show anyway. 4) I enjoy classical music, so does she.5) He must be ill, for he is absent today. 6) Some people waste food while others haven’t enough.7) She is fat whereas her husband is thin. 8) She cannot read, neither can she write.（二）復合句1．1) It is quite obvious that they need more help in English.2) It is good news that she is still alive.3) It doesn’t seem likely that she will e here.4) What the children like the best in the zoo are the pandas. 5) What we are badly in need of is raw material.2．1) It’s a pity that he did not e earlier.2) It is a wellknown fact that smoking can cause lung cancer.3) It is true that I encouraged him, but I didn’t actually help him.4) It didn’t seem likely that they would ever keep their promise.5) It was hard to understand why Prof. Hardy had singled out Mary for criticism.3．1) Can you tell me what kind of show they are putting on?2) I’m wondering if the letter is overweight.3) I am thinking how we can improve our study habits.4) We are still uncertain whether Henry is the right person for the job.5) Peter has always been in good health except that he has a slight headache sometimes.6) He suddenly remembered that he had forgotten to take his notebook with him.4. 1) I always took it for granted that I was far more intelligent than he was. 2) We all thought it a pity that you were unable to attend our meeting.3) We consider it important that you should mind your manners.4) He didn39。t want it known that he was too ill to go on working.5) I regard it important that every one of you