【英語】中考英語書面表達培優題(編輯修改稿)

　

【文章內容簡介】 不少。5．書面表達“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自創建文明城市文明鄉村以來,淄博人民萬眾一心,眾 志成城,讓人點贊的行為隨處可見。作為中學生,我們也做出了自己的努力。請根據以下所 給要點,寫一篇 100 詞左右的英語短文。；；；；（自主發揮,至少兩點）參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in 39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （習慣于）queuing up （排隊） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what39。s more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ，豐富了短文內容，使語言表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發揮的作文。它要求將所規定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。6． 書面表達暑假即將來臨,對于如何安排孩子初中畢業后的第一個假期,家長們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據下表提示,寫一篇英語短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時發表你自己對暑假安排的觀點。Parents39。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。s opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…注意]（1）表格中的觀點僅供參考,允許適當發揮。（2）開頭已給出,不計入總詞數。（3）文中不得出現真實姓名和校名等信息。（4）詞數:不少于80。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發揮．寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現在時態進行敘述．語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系．【點睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。7．書面表達根據下列表格的提示，寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語短文．（80詞左右）文章內容必須包含所給的所有信息．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．內容要點：過去現在1舊房1高樓2河水骯臟2河水清澈（clean and cl